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Hello rain
I see you're out today
I'm glad
I missed you so
Everytime you tap against my window
I can not help but smile

Sometimes if I listen carefully
I can hear you whispering my name
Do you remember that day at the park?
When you were sitting in one of the swings?
I do

You said
"Come swing with me!"
And of course I did
You always flew out
But somehow you managed to get back on the swing
Without me noticing

I wish you could stay forever
But mommy said that if you did
The world would drown
I guess I'll just have to wait till next time then
Good-bye rain
©2006-2009 ~CommanderSTD
:iconcommanderstd:

Author's Comments

Just something that kind of popped up in my head one night.
Everytime I read it, it feels like a little five year old is talking. xD

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:icontrueloveisorange:
I think I'm in love with you ;)

This is great. I love every line of this. Way to go.

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We judge ourselves by what we feel capable of doing, while others judge us by what we have already done.
:icontrueloveisorange:
You're welcome.

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We judge ourselves by what we feel capable of doing, while others judge us by what we have already done.

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